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Just my opinion so take it for what it is.
Girl on the left has a freakish smile that would make the Joker happy.
Girl next to her looks like she has a lip piercing. Thats fine with me but not sure if it's a shadow. Doesn't really fit the theme if it is a piercing.
Nice cleavage.The third girl from the left looks Great other than her arm clipping into her stomach. Shes the one I'd take up stairs
Not sure what the fourth girl? from the left is. I think it's a pronoun problem.
The guy on the left is either a small guy or the girls are amazons.
Points to make...
The young man on the left is only 17, and not tall either plus he's in flat shoes. ALL the girls are in substantial heels 🙂
Agreed about the smile which I've now fixed.
Clipping, again now fixed.
The girl on the right is meant to be both tall and fairly manly for reasons within the story itself. Suffice to say she's in a relationship with the third girl along.
And that was an annoying shadow artefact, not a piercing 😉
@d0gg0d ... lol, ever the realist. Unfortunately I can't see anything. Did you by chance remove the image because of realist, therefore, pessimist, Adam? 😛
Nevermind, showed up after I posted. Looks good. No clipping. The characters looks like daz characters and the lighting is about right. The noise is about right to give it that gritty 'wild west' soul. I feel Adam may be a little harsh considering the render engine and the artistic choices made..
Anyway, nice work.
-Oh, I do see the clipping. F U Adam.. :D:D:D 😛
@kefka 😂😂😂😂 Cheers. It'll be updated shortly anyway, so hopefully slightly improved but your comments much appreciated
Been a problem for me constantly. When the boss comes up and ask something like, how do you think the company is doing?...
@d0gg0d LOL!
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