@psygameboy, Ah ok. I probably would have pushed the modern aspects a little more then, given her a lip piercing as well or pierce something that's focused on in the image for more impact. The dermal piercings are nice but there's nothing pulling the eye there, the tribal decoration overpowers it. Maybe if it picked up the light more it would catch the eye?
Anyhow, it's a good render and a fantastic use of photoshop to bring the features you wanted to the fore and add those things you couldn't get in render.