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September 13, 2021 at 4:46 AM #1729488
Any other film noir fans here?
September 13, 2021 at 7:01 AM #1729495OK you're right @Legolas18. I'll get rid of it. The problem is that almost everything is sharing texture maps with other things so it's hard to take bits away.
September 13, 2021 at 7:30 AM #1729506Changed the image. The bloody footpath shares the same texture as the street signs and a whole lot of other stuff... lazy Polish.
And I didn't get the City Street from here. Didn't want the bundle just the street.September 13, 2021 at 8:00 AM #1729524film noir.. Good tip... I think that I should also make one again.
B&W renders looks so beautiful printed on high glossy (A3) paper.Great render. Was the wet street also in the package??
September 13, 2021 at 8:28 AM #1729533@Lucafeelgood Well yes and no. It kind of is because everything has melallicity turned way up. I turned it down because I didn't like it then changed my mind. There's also a water plane I put on the footpath.... sorry sidewalk. I changed some signs which was really hard because like I said there's only a few base textures in the whole set and finding which bits belong where was a nightmare.
September 13, 2021 at 9:10 AM #1729545This is amazing! I love the atmosphere; great job! And I'm a film noir fan too, so this pretty much ticks all the boxes!
September 14, 2021 at 3:24 AM #1729744beautiful image! i have a nutty question: is it, like, 95% desaturated? i.e. slightly in color? my eye is not what it once was, but i swear i detect hints of color in the cigar signage, the most distant car, and some of the windowpane reflections. probably just crazy ole me...
September 14, 2021 at 4:18 AM #1729751No you're not going nuts @Jakesilvey. There's a tiny bit of colour in there.
September 14, 2021 at 9:41 AM #1729847It looks great Frank. I love the mood. What a time it must have been...
There was an interesting contest in 2018 for noir style that I think you will like:
https://zonegfx.com/forums/topic/contest-film-noir/September 15, 2021 at 2:13 AM #1730023December 4, 2021 at 3:24 AM #1754427I's a beautiful picture, a full atmosphere and a great composition.
One suggest : Did you try a little more contrast on the background (buildings) ? I see a difference between the very contrasted red car (yes, the rain) and the buildings. Maybe a Dark black-magenta in the contrast of the buildings should match a little more the two parts ?
But i love this gentle picture.December 4, 2021 at 11:57 PM #1754724My suggest is a bullshit, it doesn't work ! Forget this...
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Great image. Loving the feel and look.
December 5, 2021 at 12:26 AM #1754730"My suggest is a bullshit" @Tristanbresson.
No it's not at all. It's a good point and I think the difference in contrast is because there's a fog pane that doesn't extend down very much, so the car has less fog in front of it.
It might have been better to lower the fog a bit closer to the ground. Thanks for your comment Tristanbresson.January 21, 2022 at 5:25 AM #1768952Wow! Fantastic work!
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