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Her name was Lola ...
Still a very bland work in progress of the hottest spot north of Havana.. need to work on the lighting and the crowd.. right now only the main characters are there.. Lola, Tony and Rico..
Guy on the left right hand is clipping into his leg. His left hand is clipping into his shirt collar.
The female has about 10mm of shoe touching the ground, so she looks like she is jumping or landing. Not sure if that's the look implied but I'd put a little more foot on the ground.
The mirror on the bar looks weird. shows bottles but not much else. I'm going to guess the wall in the back was deleted for a light and camera. The mirror should show the other side of the room or some other aspect of the club. The ceiling looks gone as well but less noticeable.
There are 7 full drinks placed around the club. No empties or half-finished ones.
I think the white guy should be eyeballing the dancer and not the other guy unless he's into that sorta thing.
I like the idea behind this composition. Understanding it is a wip, my suggestion would be to figure out which of the three figures we want to draw our main attention to, the patron’s gesture in the middle seems a bit off. Otherwise, looking forward to your next iteration!
@d0gg0d Thanks for the comments.. this is an early WIP and there are a lot of thing to do on this..
I have removed quite a few items from the scene that are not part of the render and that would explain the mirror..
The drinks will be emptied once we have a crowd coming in 🙂
.. and as for the eyeballing.. the white guy (Tony) is supposed to be (angrily) eyeballing the other guy (Rico) because he is eyeballing his girl (Lola)
Guess you need to be familiar with the song to understand the picture ..
@diviniren Guess we were both posting at the same time.. thanks for the comments 🙂
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