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February 12, 2018 at 4:27 pm #493072
"Was it worth it?"
She whispered, "Yes. All of it."February 12, 2018 at 7:08 pm #493186If that arrow got a lung, its game over unless shes got a cleric friend.
February 12, 2018 at 7:14 pm #493197Great work. ๐
February 12, 2018 at 7:22 pm #493203Very nice...lots of "movement" and expression in this render.
February 12, 2018 at 8:58 pm #493270Thanks so much guys! Had to paint the tears, blood, arrow and flower petal. Drove me batty getting it right, but it was worth it. <3
February 12, 2018 at 10:29 pm #493386Awesome! Great use of DOF!
February 12, 2018 at 10:39 pm #493397A fallen hero, nice work Is there something in her right hand or is that just the way the ground looks ?
February 13, 2018 at 1:28 am #493506Nice.
I'd change the angle on the arrow, make it more vertical (or even remove it)
If i were niggling:
- flagstone scale is too high, crank that down like half.
- adjust the sword so it's heading out the corner of the frame (though you'd probably get a better effect pulling the whole shot way out to full body)February 13, 2018 at 5:02 pm #494329@coolcat One hand is reaching for a petal, the other a falling sword.
Thanks rob! (I have no luck tagging you rofl)
@silverboax Thanks! Curious as to why you'd remove the arrow--is it too distracting? Or is the color jarring? Huh, the flagstones are large. I'll try and fix that when I remember.Sword: you mean completely out of her hand entirely? As for full shot, I really wanted the focus on her face/emotion. Rendering the full length felt too busy, if that makes sense?
February 13, 2018 at 5:09 pm #494339Oh I thought that that was blood on the ground I didn't realize it was a petal, my bad:)
February 13, 2018 at 7:29 pm #494437arrow seemed ok to me but I do think that falling she'd have less of a grasp on the sword. perhaps even drop the sword and reach out with both hands?
February 13, 2018 at 7:34 pm #494448arrow seemed ok to me but I do think that falling sheโd have less of a grasp on the sword.
Not necessarily, hence the term "death-grip". ๐
February 13, 2018 at 7:58 pm #494478Yes, but is the sword that important to her?
February 14, 2018 at 1:01 am #494700@sparklepants - sword I just mean6t the angle, not taking it out of her hand. Having it go out the corner will help the flow of the image.
The arrow just looks off to me, partly because ts right on the edge of the blur. The angle itโs on would also indicate she was shot from below. But ultimately I just think itโd look better if it were closer to facing the camera, or simply not there. The blood will still tell the story I think. Optionally, maybe a 2nd/3rd arrow close to the first to sell the story more.
March 15, 2018 at 4:17 am #532244This might look nice in place of the petal.
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