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  • #493072
    SparklePants
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    "Was it worth it?"
    She whispered, "Yes. All of it."

    #493186
    ADAM
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    If that arrow got a lung, its game over unless shes got a cleric friend.

    #493197
    Phibes
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    Great work. ๐Ÿ˜€

    #493203
    Pap
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    Very nice...lots of "movement" and expression in this render.

    #493270
    SparklePants
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    Thanks so much guys! Had to paint the tears, blood, arrow and flower petal. Drove me batty getting it right, but it was worth it. <3

    #493386
    PhantomF4
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    Awesome! Great use of DOF!

    #493397
    coolcat
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    A fallen hero, nice work Is there something in her right hand or is that just the way the ground looks ?

    #493506
    silverboaX
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    Nice.

    I'd change the angle on the arrow, make it more vertical (or even remove it)

    If i were niggling:
    - flagstone scale is too high, crank that down like half.
    - adjust the sword so it's heading out the corner of the frame (though you'd probably get a better effect pulling the whole shot way out to full body)

    #494329
    SparklePants
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    @coolcat One hand is reaching for a petal, the other a falling sword.

    Thanks rob! (I have no luck tagging you rofl)


    @silverboax
    Thanks! Curious as to why you'd remove the arrow--is it too distracting? Or is the color jarring? Huh, the flagstones are large. I'll try and fix that when I remember.

    Sword: you mean completely out of her hand entirely? As for full shot, I really wanted the focus on her face/emotion. Rendering the full length felt too busy, if that makes sense?

    #494339
    coolcat
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    Oh I thought that that was blood on the ground I didn't realize it was a petal, my bad:)

    #494437
    ADAM
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    arrow seemed ok to me but I do think that falling she'd have less of a grasp on the sword. perhaps even drop the sword and reach out with both hands?

    #494448
    Phibes
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    arrow seemed ok to me but I do think that falling sheโ€™d have less of a grasp on the sword.

    Not necessarily, hence the term "death-grip". ๐Ÿ˜€

    #494478
    ADAM
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    Yes, but is the sword that important to her?

    #494700
    silverboaX
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    @sparklepants - sword I just mean6t the angle, not taking it out of her hand. Having it go out the corner will help the flow of the image.

    The arrow just looks off to me, partly because ts right on the edge of the blur. The angle itโ€™s on would also indicate she was shot from below. But ultimately I just think itโ€™d look better if it were closer to facing the camera, or simply not there. The blood will still tell the story I think. Optionally, maybe a 2nd/3rd arrow close to the first to sell the story more.

    #532244
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    This might look nice in place of the petal.

    (https://zonegfx.com/the-rose/)

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