Someone Else's Wife

[ADAM]

@dita

I dislike the feet and the hair. Pose is ok. She looks to young. Overall I think its passable but really needs a little more tweaking.

[Dita]

Not a bad start, I think she maybe a little broad in the hips. A little more angle on the pose, a little more twist on her body, & maybe a little more muscle definition...I'll admit finding the right hair style can be a nightmare, the perfect style won't do what we want/need it to do, and something you don't think is right, does what's asked of it. But, 3 hours of trying hair styles out, with nothing to show for it, can be the worse thing...

[ADAM]

Yeah, I messed around with it off and on during the day. Biggest issue was the hair. Trying to get one that looked ok draping over the couch. Seems most hair say its Dforce but is a poor attempt at it. This seemed to work the best but I don't like the way it meets the scalp. I kinda went through the morphs quickly. I tried G9 first but hated it. G8.1 Worked a lot better. Better skins and more morphs to choose from. I think shes a bit to broad everywhere. I need to slim her a bit and add a little more definition. I did have it turned up but went back and softened it. I figured it was worth a try to see if I could do it and how it would turn out.

[Frank21]

Hi Adam. I love they way you've draped the hair and the POV works well. I'd do something with her left arm, it looks a bit lost. The floor could do with a texture/shader to make it more real-looking. BTW the word "to" is a preposition not an adverb 😛.

[ADAM]

Thanks for the feedback. Shes just in the basic Daz HDRI. I just wanted to give an attempt at the RL picture Dita posted. I'm not really happy with the model so I didn't add extras like a floor. I tried to get as close to her pose as I felt investing the time in. I edited the morph couch pose slightly. I might give it a bit more attention when my minds into it. I got a few other things sidetracking me.

Reminds me of
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r-lQWk79VAE

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