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I vote for @jbuckland1984 probably because I’m a sucker for black and white. It’s a nice interesting scene with a couple of characters.
@soeperman, I thought your render was really nice but the composition needed work. There’s a lot of empty sky showing in the scene so you either need to have a reason for it or get rid of it. The background ME ship also blended into your character and her weapon, with the colours and the line of the weapon running from left to right. That just messed up your depth on the foreground and midground because you’ve got the gun, that’s clearly in front of the character and the silhouette/line then seems to join with the vehicle and you’ve got to think about what you’re seeing. I think if you’d chosen a higher angle to shoot down from or had the ship coming in to land behind the figure then it would have been a lot more effective.
@norshine, I’ve sent you a message. I like the action in the shot.
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