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Scene Dialog:
Chief Gasul: Good morning, sir. I am Chief Richard Gasul and this is Officer Isabell Patel. Is this the Blake residence?
MC: Yes, I'm Johnathan Blake. Is there something wrong officer?
Chief Gasul: This is regarding your wife, Madeline Blake..
(MC nods demurely in dreadful realization)
Chief Gasul: may we come in?
*Scene Complete*
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How it was made:Rendered in Daz Studio
Post work done in several programs (secret)
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Thoughts:My girlfriend told me Officer Patel's breasts are too big. She's secretly a SJW. 😛
I like the render. And Adam's tongue in cheek humour. It looks like Chief Gasul and Officer Isabell Patel is comfortable being in each others personal space. Is there something going on?
My dialogue version would go like this:
Chief Gasul: Good morning, sir. Police. Is this the Blake residence?
MC: Yes..?
Chief Gasul: I am Chief Richard Gasul and this is Officer Isabell Patel.
MC: Johnathan Blake. Is something wrong officer?
Chief Gasul: This is regarding your wife, Madeline Blake..
(MC nods demurely in dreadful realization)
Chief Gasul: may we come in?I don't understand the context of MC nodding with demure.
Her breast size is perfect 😉👍
Adam: Asymmetry is the key to realism. 😛 But nice observation on the R's overlapping the characters faces. I would rather not watermark the art but you know. :\
Cage: Yes. The police officers are indeed having a sexual affair, though it is somewhat coerced by the Captain. As for the dialog, it was just something I threw together on the spot. I'm only in the early stages of fleshing out the story. Though it is no longer a well used definition, it was also used to describe a slow delayed response. At least I think it was. I thought the breasts were perfect too but don't want to upset the gf.
My girlfriends SJW updated scene:
She does look more natural now, which makes her look sexier.
However, if you like your non SJW version better, I would keep it. For me, doing things my way keeps me motivated.
I'm interested in the story and would like a link when you release it ☺️
Keep it up! It looks great.
I'd cut back on the Topaz opacity in the 2nd pic. It knocked out the clarity of the Chiefs eyes.
In reality, clothes don't fit women like in the first pic. ESPECIALLY a police officer..
Creators should be making womens tops non-shrink wrapped.Police women in my area have clothing that fits pretty snug. Guys also since the bulletproof vest takes up space.
Only very thin officers have loose clothing. Task force here are all pretty buff.Dragon: The fit of the uniform is unfortunately a victim of auto-fit. I wanted the uniforms to be the same, look authentic and have a short sleeve since the image takes place during summer. Therefore I only had two choice; the M4/V4 uniforms which would cause all kinds of unwanted deformaties (especially to the shoulder and shoe areas), or the G3 Male uniform by IH Kang. You are definitely right though, the waist and chest areas are/were super tight.
As for the render, I actually aged Captain Gasul. Now he has that Clint Eastwood squint going on. I did totally put more oil paint filter on it but that is more of a preventative of stolen artwork. 😛 In its final process, I hope to have the renders almost life-like.
Adam: This is true. Uniforms across the world and even across the USA have different cuts. Some men and women just fill them out better than others. 😮 Honestly, Officer Patel is more of a desk jockey and personal pet of Chief Gasul's than an actual patrol officer.
The guy fills out his uniform well and is believable. The girls breast look to odd in the first picture. The filter/effect used to distort the image really takes away from it when viewed up close. I am not sure I understand fully peoples need/want to ruin images with a watermark. Browsing the net I can find images rendered in HD quality by very skilled professional artist that have no watermark. I use to watermark some of my better images and quit when I saw what was out there in the wild.
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