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Almost didn't save this render. The more I look at it, the less I am happy with it but can't figure out what makes me so unhappy beyond the lighting. Imperfect
**Edit - My husband uploaded it to deviantart, so I'll put that link.
Id say the lack of movement. Blur the backround to stimulate speed. Also maybe some wind effects on the hair.
Rank:The spokes. That's what is getting to me. Thank you. The bike in the photo is the simply named: Vintage Motorcycle. Was the only one I could find on a quick search that allowed me to place the riders as the are.
@eelgoo good catch
if you ask me, the main issue, is the lack of expression. It's a high speed shootout, there has to be some tense, some rage, her face should reflect that. Give that, and the lack of motion blur, the static spokes, and the not messed hair, will be mostly unnoticed, drawn to the intensity of the centerpiece
@yan Thats been a weak spot for me. I almost always forget to add more expression. I just really like the default blank look i guess it may be because ive seen very few good realistic expressions.
Rank:@d0gg0d Same here. I did actually add an anger expression but didn't like it and dialed it back, apparently too much. I really need to expand my g8 expression collection.
@burgerchick
Its hard to mimic reality and time consuming.
I normally pick a pre made pose thats close to what I want then mess with it till i like it. Ill probably have to start doing that with expressions.@yanmartyn : You're absolutely right.
@d0gg0d : 3/5 I have to cancel my render because I forgot to put an expression.@ladyburger : I don't know if you have Photoshop, but there's a number of way you can make the wheels rotate and produce a motion blur easily. I remember using those techniques for a contest and it was the first time.
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