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Very nice. only thing "I" dislike is I would like to see more of the other plane or none of it. Yes thats probably the way you meant it to be I just feel my eyes drawn to the wing tip of that other plane.
It looks really good. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe adjusting the angle of the light. It wasn't until I opened the image in its full size that I saw there was another plane behind the main one.
I agree about the wing of the other plane, it's distracting. Ditch it or move it full frame in the far background.
I also agree about the light. I would suggest moving the sun lower in relation to the plane so your god rays aren't blurring the plane so much (i.e. so that not so much of the god ray is in front of the fuselage). I know this is a pain in the ass with DAZs handling of volumetrics.
You can move the wing in front, out of focus and give the feeling "protection and we are here for you buddy"
The third plain doesn't add something. I agree about the light. Maybe you need also a more yellowish tone. (and sorry for my English)
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