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George always struggled to stay focused in Miss Alveres's class...
LinkI like many of the details in this one 🙂
Good hair, the main girl looks good (although the side chick looks weird?).
My only criticism would be the illumination, which seems to be a bit too uniform (except for the main girl), which gives it a bit of a flat look. I understand that indoor lighting is hard though :'(
Used a ghost light for main char, only had ceiling armatures, fiddled with them, but as you say, indoor lighting....
Like the layout and concept.
Light looks like its coming from the boys face.
Seems like you have a fetish for the smooshed face look. Nothing wrong with that just not my taste.
Im with Legolas18 on the main babe looks good.
Poor George is thinking about biology when he should be thinking about trigonometry.
The tables look very bare... I used to have a collection of pencils, pens, erasers, ruler, setsquare, compass etc for these sort of renders.
Another two details I noticed:
The side chick has no eyebrows :'(
The main chick seems to have a weird collision on her scalp.I am with Frank, need more stuff on the table too 🙂
(maybe use this link? )
Sorry for giving you a hard time, gaver, it's because I care (?) 🙂
Frank makes a good point. Unless its some sort or test where youre not allowed anything other than a pencil and Ive had those before.
Only way to improve is listen to feedback If you dont you could think your making good content if all you have is yes men.
Thanx for the feedback guys.
I agree about the "bareness" of the pic.
Not every pic, but sometimes, I try to acomplish something ( Like lighting in fog etc) I am to focused on getting the "technic" right and thus do not have eye for the other things.
Altough I am playing with DAZ for a while now, I still have lot to figure out etc.
HEre it was POV
I wanted him to be distracred by the clevage, so how do I put my cam to get that idea across....
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