Not a bad start, I think she maybe a little broad in the hips. A little more angle on the pose, a little more twist on her body, & maybe a little more muscle definition...I'll admit finding the right hair style can be a nightmare, the perfect style won't do what we want/need it to do, and something you don't think is right, does what's asked of it. But, 3 hours of trying hair styles out, with nothing to show for it, can be the worse thing...