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I like your composition a lot! Try adding some depth of field into your camera which should help draw more eyes to your subject and her amazing pose!
Thnx
Thought about DOF, but she is standing "in a corner", so normally one would not see DOF
But thank you for the complimentGood morning, I was wondering where you got this mask. Or did you use Pshop. Makei was right about his de-focus. I should use even more DOF so that the back wall almost disappears. That's my silly opinion. Then I see that her fingers disappear into the wall and her skirt has a poke through. But anyway, is a good picture with a beautiful woman in Rome. Have a nice day!
I agree about more aggressive DOF. Apart from that I like the posing and particularly the hair and mask.
Just an OT observation... up until about six months ago there were very few posts to the Art Showcase forum. It's so pleasing to see people are now regularly showing their artwork. It's mostly the same small group of members, and I don't always add a comment, but personally I love seeing other people's work 😍💖😍💖 I'll try to contribute more regularly in 2023. Frank.
Agree with @makemodus More DOF in front wall, a little in the back. It can be difficult to do with in studio camera though. I even used the DOF camera doctor by RiverSoft Arts, for my last render, and it worked for shit. Finally decided to render the branch alone and add it in post.
Imma make some suggestions though. I don't know if the hair is dforce, looks like it though. You should increase the initialization time. Hair looks like it's floating forward, especially with the head cocked back a little.
Use light to give eyes reflection (or add one of the overlay reflections via geometry shell). Especially with the mask on, her eyes are very important.
Also.. REMOVE THOSE DAMNED EYEBROWS!!!! 🙂
Otherwise, nice pic!
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