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    tokyiro
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    just something
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    #2060419
    InverseKinematics
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    Cool 🙂

    #2060423
    tokyiro
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    @InverseKinematics thank you thank you

    #2060426
    InverseKinematics
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    I'd offer that image on a market place as a print because it sums up the madness of the 21st century IMO 🙂

    #2060474
    tokyiro
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    @InverseKinematics you think the image is good to the point of selling it?

    #2060591
    ADAM
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    I like it. Id want it a bit more polished up if I were buying art but Im sure some people would buy it. The composition does grab your attention.

    #2060707
    tokyiro
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    @ADAM thanky ou thank you, define "more polished" please

    #2060734
    ADAM
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    These of course are my opinions and may or may not be what you were aiming for.

    Close-up on the mouth it looks like there are squiggly lines. I dont know if its saliva, threads or hair.

    The stitched scarring is ok but its just ok.

    The blood and paint at first glance blend in together so to me it looked like the blood was off till I realized it was paint and blood. My eyes are getting old.

    She seem to be just opening her mouth. No facial contortions, stressed/stretched face muscles like she was in agony or lost it like some people do on cops body cameras.

    It may just be my screen bit the image seems a bit washed out.

    the hair passes through objects rather than lays on them.

    The skin has no detail. No pores or thin facial hair.

    While Im no render master I am very picky about things. One reason I dislike most of my own renders.

    When I visit this site I realize what is possible and how far I am from being there
    https://www.artstation.com/

    #2060738
    tokyiro
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    @ADAM i see thanks for the detailed help something i must say are what i wanted and i saw them and i could have fixex them but i wanted to let them be like that, for exemple the hair you mention, the skin and the blood and the paint, they where not errors or (cant fix them) but personal preference

    #2060780
    ADAM
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    That's why art is difficult to criticize. Its different for each individuals opinion.

    Unless you know exactly what the artists goal is/was. 20 people could look at a painting and you could get 20 different opinions.

    I still like it but the older I get the less I need. So to buy something like art it would have to be something I was REALLY interested in.

    #2060823
    InverseKinematics
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    @tokyiro

    you think the image is good to the point of selling it?

    Yes I do. But without repeating what has already been stated, I kinda agree with 0gg0d about the refinements 🙂

    Good art for this century and wouldn't look out of place in a Dystopian movie.

    #2060954
    tokyiro
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    thank you all for the replys, and i agree even for me is not good enough thats why im not seeling images lol, while its good there is a million things i could have done differently.

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