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[tokyiro]

new work, girl i just made what you think?
feel free to judge me and give your feedback

[Because789]

That's a great render! I like the tone of the lighting a lot, and the highlights in the hair add a lot to the image in a subtle way. I'd love to know more about your post-work process.

[gaver]

Nice render, but the"s" on the glasses are distracting, I would lose the if possible

[Frank21]

Great image but for me the only thing that's looks off-putting is the transmapped hair. I think fibermesh/strand-based hair would have looked much better & more realistic.

[Serge2804]

Hi guys, nice portrait, pretty lady, and good "work" in her "dreaming mood". I join the others in the notifications. The "s" on the glasses is disturbing and "destroy" a lite bite too much her pretty eyes. She has too much hairs crossing her face, thats pity.

[Legolas18]

As Frank pointed out, the trans-mapped hair doesn't look too good, especially the strands in front of the face. There is also a weird line in the mid left part of the image, and I am not too clear on what that yellow part on the right side is.

Also, the S reflection on the glasses is quite distracting, and the room has been tilted?

Other than all that, I like the tone, and the pensive expression.

[tokyiro]

@gaver the s on the glasses are from the ceiling lights unfortunatly glasses reflect light.

@Frank21 i agree on the hair i didnt liked it really that much it looks great on faraway shots tho but when it comes to closeups its nhheee

@serge2804 the strands where kinda nhe i liked them but at the same time i didnt becuse of how they look, the S opn glasses is the ceiling light being reflected

@Legolas18 agree with the hair tbh tho i wanted a somewhat asian short hair that goes behind the hair i just know about this one and ichigo hair, weird line is a furniture and a wall behind her, shes is sitting the yelolow part is a chair the back of thew chair where shes at, the S reflection is the ceiling lights or i thone down the light or get them of glasses reflect light, the camera was tilted, i think i tilted it and forgot to put it back stright again lmao

[Frank21]

You still have the scene so change the hair, let it drape and see what comes out. I like the glasses though and would love to see you re-work the image because it's good.

[Serge2804]

@tokyiro Guy, it is not at all a review about your work and you image. this portrait is really nice.
as says Frank21, we just wish to help you to make it perfect.
About the "s" maybe just rotate her face the light source, it mays help for.

[diviniren]

Love the render and character! What filter did you use to get this effect on the finish?

But yes, the hair looks off and the glasses look mangled, maybe try dialing out some of the shape morphs carries over from the character to the glasses?

[tokyiro]

@Diviniren i didnt use a especific filter, it was a combination of alot of things like curves, hue and saturation, vibrance, collor look up, raw filters etc.
and yee the hair its kinda nhee maybe the problem was the strands

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