I like the image, but my constructive criticism would be:
1) the image is a bit too bright (under the hat everything is a bit too visible?)
2) There is too much brightness in the background (especially on the right), hence there is no good focus point (in other words, the eyes are attracted by brightness, and there are too many bright spots) 🙁
Perhaps, a lower exposure and more contrast would help?
Grin,I used to get comment some my images are to dark,so I uped it for a change...note to self: stick to your own ideas 🙂
Still playing with the light settings...